
I’m enrolled on an online session writing haiku so I thought I’d better do a few warm-up exercises. I’m no expert but know the traditional ones reference a season so some of these do. The syllable count of 5-7-5 is often ignored by contemporary poets but I’ve kept to this in most cases. Haiku usually capture a moment in time, often evoke an image and describe concrete details while at the same time suggesting universal themes. Haiku should be read more than once – they are meant to be savoured like culinary delicacies.
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sickle moon in blue
sipping tea in hot sunshine-
contented for now.
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cat chasing shadows
while I sit in baking sun
iced tea by my side.
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a hot day in June-
jumping spider on my arm
pencil in my hand.
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bees and wasps buzzing
foxglove nodding in a breeze
droplets on the leaves.
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after watering
droplets sparkle on a leaf –
the sun’s pouring heat.
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it’s thirty degrees-
two cats hiss at each other
I watch from my deckchair.
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haiku in July
sun and moon against blue sky-
it’s too much for me!
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under July’s sky
distant sirens become sharp-
the temperatures rise.
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how long do they live?
butterflies dancing in air –
she talks about death.
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a cat crouches, still –
a feather’s twitching in the wind
a pigeon’s remains.
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morning glory
reaches towards the high sun –
she collects seeds.
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how vast karma is!
we walk round the pond-
water off a duck’s back.
Good stuff Eric
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Thanks Gary. Here’s a challenge; write some haiku using place names.
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